i never came to this site to read other peoples poetry or art, but now, with your work and some other peers works, i find myself captivated and logging in solely for that reason
i wanna thank you for making me less selfish and more open
Yeah, when i initially started writing here, it was purely for me and i didn’t bother much about other people’s writings…until i discovered some amazing blogs here and they were so inspiring, my priorities changed slightly since! So glad you feel the same, its some great stuff out there.
And what i was trying to say in my comment earlier, was that you left the comment in the correct place, i dont know why you think it appears at the bottom of all other comments.
Ok. Thank you.
But I thought it would appear just below his comment.
This make me confused now, and I must think – and soon my nose will start to bleed!
Thank you for stopping, liking, and commenting on several posts. Your poetry and pictures are beautiful. I look forward to following your secretive blog.
Short and sweet, I really like it! Maybe its just the cynic in me but I have to wonder if you would have so many comments already had you not included that photo of yourself (not that I’m complaining)!
I recommend pairing it to Whitman’s poem “One hour to madness and Joy.” I did a symposium on the topic a couple of years ago. Hint: “I still have the kiss of Whitman on my lips” Wilde ~ after a brief meeting with the poet.
The poem with the picture work perfectly together. I was reading the comments…and I believe the picture helps intensify the words and the words add more depth to the picture. Making it more then just a “sexy image.” Beautiful Work, Chatty! Beautiful.
Bloody hell! Perfect edit with a great piece to match. Damn…
Swearing birdie
Your influence and your photo and your words are to blame
Blame taken. Guilty owly.
A very guilty owly
but no complaints here
Phew
To go along with the other post I just replied to about going up to someone who catches your eye, all I’m gonna say is… “How you doin?!”
Hahahaha!
;)
Great piece of poetry.
Is that you in the pic?
Thank you, its just a short something, nothing great. And yes, this is me.
I love short pieces of poetry, I’m an Emily Dickinson, Stevie Smith sort of person.
That is a great shot.
You are beautiful!!
I prefer short, because one is not presented with a chance to get bored.
Oh, and thank you.
Good poem, but why did you underline it with this photo? It better if one imagine!
I’ll keep that advice for next time.
I like the photo, it is like a shoot in “Chris Isaak – Wicked game”
Thanks
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beautiful. and provoking
Thanks. Your feedback means a lot.
i never came to this site to read other peoples poetry or art, but now, with your work and some other peers works, i find myself captivated and logging in solely for that reason
i wanna thank you for making me less selfish and more open
Yeah, when i initially started writing here, it was purely for me and i didn’t bother much about other people’s writings…until i discovered some amazing blogs here and they were so inspiring, my priorities changed slightly since! So glad you feel the same, its some great stuff out there.
definitely!
I wanted to post a comment on apatheticpoet about “beautiful. and provoking” but it went down bellow all of your comments for some reason!
lmao
What that means?
He meant “laughing my ass off”.
And what i was trying to say in my comment earlier, was that you left the comment in the correct place, i dont know why you think it appears at the bottom of all other comments.
Ok. Thank you.
But I thought it would appear just below his comment.
This make me confused now, and I must think – and soon my nose will start to bleed!
laugh my arse off,
basically a friendly laugh
It seems to be as you initially wanted to me – under the comment you wanted
so all is good
I don´t understand!
Hidden lust shows itself in forms you’ve never imagined it could.
Perfect match of pic&poem.
Thanks my dear! I guess with you knowing me the longest, its a compliment to see you are still around supporting what i do! Thanks!
Thank you for stopping, liking, and commenting on several posts. Your poetry and pictures are beautiful. I look forward to following your secretive blog.
Take care,
Ivon
Thank you for doing the same!
Short and sweet, I really like it! Maybe its just the cynic in me but I have to wonder if you would have so many comments already had you not included that photo of yourself (not that I’m complaining)!
Very good observation. Probably not. The power of sex appeal. People do tend to “judge a book by its cover”, so why not make a cover pretty?
Oh I agree, sex it up!! I wonder though, would it have the same effect for me? I think sex appeal works much better on men than it does on women haha!
Try and see! Haha
Ha, challenge accepted!!
“The only way to get rid of temptation is to yield to it” ~Oscar Wilde ~ The Picture of Dorian Gray. One of my favorites.
I read that book 3 times. Cried two of them. Very moving. Thanks for reminding me if the quote.
I recommend pairing it to Whitman’s poem “One hour to madness and Joy.” I did a symposium on the topic a couple of years ago. Hint: “I still have the kiss of Whitman on my lips” Wilde ~ after a brief meeting with the poet.
Best not to.
Great photo.
Look what a cat dragged in.
Raises eyebrow. And shrugs.
As one would expect you to..
The poem with the picture work perfectly together. I was reading the comments…and I believe the picture helps intensify the words and the words add more depth to the picture. Making it more then just a “sexy image.” Beautiful Work, Chatty! Beautiful.
Thanks
i like different opinions from people. Its fun to see how readers react differently, its inspiring! Thanks for kind words, dear.
As always, thank you for being so damn good at creating such beautiful pieces of writing,
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Short – and ever so slightly bittersweet!
With such feelings guilt doth lie and our other sins do then frolick,
Oh what evils as do arise when our thought becomes shambolic
Brilliant brilliant words! Thanks!
(blush!) you’re the poet – i dabble in babble
Temptation. Sigh…
…Even your short writings demand attention.
Im trying.
Love your style! Keep Up The Good Work! xoxo