Eyes. Closed.
Mouth. Not.
Neither are legs.
Hands. Locked.
Together with yours.
Above us.
Smells. Intensified.
Movements. Quicker.
Than the heart rate.
Lover-like. Affairs.
Animal-like. Actions.
Us. Lusting.
Over each other.
With no. Happy end.
To finish off. With.
CHATTYOWL
I fell asleep at the end…
Huh.
Yum..that is all
Finish. Overrated Begin. Again
Yes. Please.
OUCH! Not nice – i always try for a happy ‘ending’! (or a couple even?)
Hehe, isnt that great to know?
Great poem. I really love the pace of this poem, really well done!
Thanks you! Glad you did..
Great poem, Owl. I happen to be someone who loves this kind of staccato effect. Well-done!
Thanks! That makes me proud!
Interesting writing style which I’ve not seen from you before (or maybe I haven’t read enough of you yet). Very enjoyable.
Yes, it was new for me. Just wanted to try something different. Glad you approve…
This is fantastic. The quick jump to the next word. Painting a picture with barely saying anything at all. Very hot and sensual catching the very essence of this type of encounter. I love this.
Im so glad you like this! It is slightly different for me, so I wasn’t too sure. Your positive feedback makes me smile
thanks dear.
I know and the difference is very noticeable but you pull it off so well. It is a fantastic piece of art and it seemed so effortlessly done. I think you should experiment more with this, for sure!
and you are well deserved of the positive! 